The pictures go really well with the writing, and they really stand out. Also The pages look really professional and are laid out really well, the only other thing i would say is that you could have used a little bit more colour, but it still looks really striking and effective.
The main thing i like about your magazine is the double page spread, it has a very clean and stylish look, the image goes well with the layout aswell. You have a good variety of shot distances in your magazine. The contents page looks slightly diffrent from the rest of the magazine.
the pictures in the magazine are really good, they fit with the 'music vibe' thats being created, the dps makes you want to read the article because of the way it's layed out. I think he could improve on the contents page, just because the front cover and the dps look really professional and the contents doesn't fit as well.
I like your front cover because it's clean and stands out just like your double page spread however I dont think there is a theme that runs through so they could be from seperate magazines.
I love the double page spread, its simple but effective, and i think it goes really well with the front cover, also the use of font is really well thought out. But i think the contents page could tie in with the magazine a little bit more.
The pictures go really well with the writing, and they really stand out. Also The pages look really professional and are laid out really well, the only other thing i would say is that you could have used a little bit more colour, but it still looks really striking and effective.
ReplyDeleteThe main thing i like about your magazine is the double page spread, it has a very clean and stylish look, the image goes well with the layout aswell. You have a good variety of shot distances in your magazine. The contents page looks slightly diffrent from the rest of the magazine.
ReplyDeletethe pictures in the magazine are really good, they fit with the 'music vibe' thats being created, the dps makes you want to read the article because of the way it's layed out.
ReplyDeleteI think he could improve on the contents page, just because the front cover and the dps look really professional and the contents doesn't fit as well.
I like your front cover because it's clean and stands out just like your double page spread however I dont think there is a theme that runs through so they could be from seperate magazines.
ReplyDeleteI love the double page spread, its simple but effective, and i think it goes really well with the front cover, also the use of font is really well thought out. But i think the contents page could tie in with the magazine a little bit more.
ReplyDeleteThe quality of your photography is excellent and clearly targets the audience. Zoe
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